{"id":839,"date":"2009-04-21T19:44:00","date_gmt":"2009-04-21T19:44:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bestfantasynovel.com\/2009\/04\/21\/why-relatives-should-not-be-beta-readers\/"},"modified":"2009-04-21T19:44:00","modified_gmt":"2009-04-21T19:44:00","slug":"why-relatives-should-not-be-beta-readers","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/2009\/04\/21\/why-relatives-should-not-be-beta-readers\/","title":{"rendered":"Why Relatives Should Not Be Beta Readers"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I am incapable of turning down anyone who wants to read my novel, but I&#8217;ve gotta say, there are reasons to not use relatives as beta readers.<\/p>\n<p>1. You know they don&#8217;t really want to read it, would never pick it up in a book store, and are only reading it to be &#8220;nice.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>2. Probably because of #1, they make a lot of vague comments, &#8220;I liked it&#8221;, &#8220;Hey, not too bad!&#8221; and my favorite, &#8220;Wow, so all these pages are part of the book? I can hardly write ten pages, ha ha. It&#8217;s so long, you must be a really good writer.&#8221; <\/p>\n<p>3. They don&#8217;t know your genre. &#8220;Well, it&#8217;s fantasy, right, so [the characters] can just use magic at the end to fix everything.&#8221; &#8220;Maybe you should be different from all those other novels and have your heros NOT win in the end.&#8221; &#8220;How about the hero cheats on the heroine and she dumps him.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>4. Some of them don&#8217;t know the English language. Sometimes &#8220;had had&#8221; is NOT a typo.<\/p>\n<p>5. Some of them are former English teachers. In fiction, sentence fragments ARE okay, if they are deliberate.<\/p>\n<p>6. They don&#8217;t grasp historical context or world-building. &#8220;This word &#8216;doublet&#8217; sounds weird, maybe it would be more clear if you just called it, &#8216;jacket.'&#8221;  &#8220;This king is really mean to his slaves. I don&#8217;t think he&#8217;d stay in power if he was so mean.&#8221;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I am incapable of turning down anyone who wants to read my novel, but I&#8217;ve gotta say, there are reasons to not use relatives as beta readers. 1. You know they don&#8217;t really want to read it, would never pick it up in a book store, and are only reading it to be &#8220;nice.&#8221; 2. [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-839","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/839","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=839"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/839\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=839"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=839"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/taramayastales.com\/bestfantasynovel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=839"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}